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Poem Tryouts: Beyond the Pale

01 Sep

9:45 a.m. — San Antonio

listening to Hotel California sung by Vocal Sampling

Hello all. I hope you are well. Parents, I’m sure you are heaving sighs of relief. West Coast USA, stay safe. Those fires are even scarier than usual. The unpacking and putting away has gotten to the point that we can see what finished rooms will look like. We may even be able to pull the car into the garage, soon.

I have used my family as prompt inspirations, often. This time it’s an email back and forth between my two brothers. They had been talking about one thing and shifted off on a tangent.

Steve: Speaking of beyond the pale, did you know that there actually was a Pale you could be beyond? There was also a Pale of Calais, which now consists of a large Muslim refugee camp. When you break it down to its “roots”, a pale is a fencepost.

John: You’re all wrong. Read Rutherford’s Russka. It has to do with Jews in the Ukraine. Beyond the pale that is, not the book.

Steve: That was a Pale, but it was from the earlier English term applied to Ireland, which itself was ultimately from the Latin palus, or stake.

I love having a family that has this kind of discussion. I had looked the term up some years ago, being curious about the usage. I looked it up again, yesterday, and found myself fascinated by the other words that derive from the original pale, or stake: Pale is an old name for a pointed piece of wood driven into the ground and — by an obvious extension — to a barrier made of such stakes, a palisade or fence. Pole is from the same source, as are impale, paling and palisade. (worldwidewords)

Where does this leave us? Somewhat undirected, I think. Some possibilities:

1] Go with one of the other words that derives from the original.

2] Use the idiom in some way. You may, but don’t have to, quote the actual idiom.

3] Use two or three of the italicised words together.

4] Run with your own idea.

I shall see you Thursday for links and then I’m off for a week. Skip is homesick for Atlanta. We’ll take a quick road trip and I’ll be back here Tuesday the 15th for another prompt.

Happy writing, everyone.

 

 
15 Comments

Posted by on 01/09/2015 in exercises, poems, poetry

 

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15 responses to “Poem Tryouts: Beyond the Pale

  1. Luanne

    01/09/2015 at 12:19 pm

    I had no idea it came from earlier than the Jewish version.

     
  2. julespaige

    01/09/2015 at 4:49 pm

    Perhaps I gave ‘pale’ some ‘class’ with this acrosTic?
    https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/09/01/pale-arrangements-9-1-s/

    Continued success unpacking. 🙂

     
  3. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

    02/09/2015 at 5:30 am

    Interesting prompt – it took me very far! https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2015/09/02/stars-in-my-eyes/

     
  4. whimsygizmo

    02/09/2015 at 12:42 pm

     
  5. Hannah Gosselin

    02/09/2015 at 5:16 pm

    Thank you, Margo! I hope you guys have a great and safe trip! 🙂

    https://wordrustling.wordpress.com/2015/09/02/blue-jays-waking-medicine/

     

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